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EDITDECISION I'm enjoying reading these funny comments XD;; I decided I can't draw nipples. It's too much pressure on me. I'm embarrass as hell! But I tallied the votes, and nipples does win...but its too much for me to handle for this piece. So maybe next time I'll do that for something else (like a BL pic or something). And why are people fav-ing this pic and even a print request? It's not even a complete artwork........XD
EDITAGAIN Okay I already made quite a few changes esp on A..which I'm not showing haha.. But thanks to everyone's critique!! It helped a lot. I'm still contemplating the nipple idea haha. OLD Should I add nipple? I never really drew them...not even in my figure drawing classes. *so shy* Oh man abs are hard.........no wonder i don't do it often T_T;; This summer I'm just going to practice drawing lots of nude haha. CommentsNothing looks off to me.
Delicious. -- "You never waste your time. That's why I have to do it for you." If you loved A Separate Peace as much as we do, come check out its one and only RPG: [link] Most characters still neede i'm wondering about the one on the left is he as buff as the others? cuz even if the light shines differently, some shadows should catch on each ab...i think
but other than that....scrumptious <3 (loves man ab) -- "It's irrational, it's impossible, and it's against my religion" ~Miroku houshi-sama it's terrific and you better believe it! It's Chadrific! Laguna-sama Office ninjas rule! *filing paper no jutsu!!* Clubs....fool! ---<3 [link] It looks good to me. I like how you didn't actually draw lines, per se, to define the muscles. The way you used the shadows works wonderfully, and anatomically, I don't know enough about it, but it looks good to me. Personally, I like teh man abs.
Way to go! I can't wait to see the finished product -- 98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature. I have to agree to your "Delicious". XD
I personally really love the second one. -- Gotta love life. [link] I saw half-naked man so I just had to click. My roommates make fun of me with, "You just love the half-naked man, don't you?" XDD
As for critique...I'd say A is the only one I'm iffy about. The abs themselves are the least believable on that one because of the way that shadow is pointing up. Although I usually wing my half naked boys so I can't say I know the best technique. C's definitely my favorite, though! -- 【Get up 動き出せ!】♪ |
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