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EDITDECISION I'm enjoying reading these funny comments XD;; I decided I can't draw nipples. It's too much pressure on me. I'm embarrass as hell! But I tallied the votes, and nipples does win...but its too much for me to handle for this piece. So maybe next time I'll do that for something else (like a BL pic or something). And why are people fav-ing this pic and even a print request? It's not even a complete artwork........XD

EDITAGAIN Okay I already made quite a few changes esp on A..which I'm not showing haha..
But thanks to everyone's critique!! It helped a lot. I'm still contemplating the nipple idea haha.

OLD Should I add nipple? I never really drew them...not even in my figure drawing classes. *so shy*

Oh man abs are hard.........no wonder i don't do it often T_T;; This summer I'm just going to practice drawing lots of nude haha.

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:iconpedal:
Nothing looks off to me.

Delicious.

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:iconjoodlez:
LOL that's such a manly wip. :|

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:iconcrescentindigomoon:
everything looks fine
ESPECIALY the lighting...nothing wrong...
PS YUMMY BISHIES *O*

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:iconrurouniinugirl:
LOLS LIKE KH FAN ART FOR A. D:!!!!

HAWWT! You're really amazing with anatomy and coloring! T_T

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:iconchadrific:
i'm wondering about the one on the left is he as buff as the others? cuz even if the light shines differently, some shadows should catch on each ab...i think

but other than that....scrumptious <3 (loves man ab)

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it's terrific and you better believe it! It's Chadrific!

Laguna-sama

Office ninjas rule! *filing paper no jutsu!!*

Clubs....fool! ---<3 [link]
:icondark-raven06:
It looks good to me. I like how you didn't actually draw lines, per se, to define the muscles. The way you used the shadows works wonderfully, and anatomically, I don't know enough about it, but it looks good to me. Personally, I like teh man abs. :love:

Way to go! I can't wait to see the finished product ;)

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:iconmarie-chan1:
I have to agree to your "Delicious". XD

I personally really love the second one. =P

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:iconpraginfly:
the only thing wrong is they are not in my bed XD
T.T i guess it won't happen though
j/k all that aside they look wonderful i see nothing wrong:thumbsup:
:iconraidenokreuz76:
the 3rd ab seems to be better

if you want , add a ine between the packs to show it more .. but thats just my preference they look nice actually =)

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:iconshiroi-nami:
I saw half-naked man so I just had to click. My roommates make fun of me with, "You just love the half-naked man, don't you?" XDD

As for critique...I'd say A is the only one I'm iffy about. The abs themselves are the least believable on that one because of the way that shadow is pointing up. Although I usually wing my half naked boys so I can't say I know the best technique. C's definitely my favorite, though!

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